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Friday, February 1, 2013

Where Plot Lines Start Coming Together

I knew that once I had gotten over halfway through Northern Warriors that things would be a lot more interesting, since the second half is where the more interesting events happen.

One of those more interesting events is the part where different characters from different plot lines begin to interact due to the various circumstances that have brought them together.

In this first excerpt, Orion the eagle, an adviser to the Opposition, is playing host to the Revunian fairy lord Kilan, whom we met in an earlier blog post.

“Sir Ambassador,” came Lord Kilan's voice. The fairy lord entered the room. He bowed to Orion.
“How do you do?” said Orion.
“Very well, sir,” said Kilan.
“Glad to hear it. Gladya, you are dismissed,” he said to Gladya.
Gladya sniffed. She bowed to the fairy lord and departed without another word.
“What was that about?” asked Kilan.
“A small matter pertaining to the royal family, it is of no concern,” said Orion casually.
“I see,” said Kilan. “Where is Prince Dmitri?”
“Dmitri is not feeling well at the moment,” said Orion. “I am afraid he would rather not be seen.”
Lord Kilan came to the window and looked down at the beach. Dmitri had climbed out of the water and was now sitting on the sand with his head buried in his arms.
“So how bad were your losses in the battle?” Orion asked the fairy lord.
“Marginal,” said Kilan. “I heard that yours were unfortunately heavy. I am sorry. And I am sorry for the two princesses—Colonel Mikash told me.”
Orion nodded. “It is unfortunate, this business.” He repeated to Kilan the previous events of the summer and Morhanat's betrayal. “From what I have seen of the camp today, our people have lost heart.”
“I have seen it as well,” said Kilan. “It was foolish of Dmitri and Allhin to agree to this plan, taking on the entire goblin army alone. Do you know if the Prince intends to resume the campaign?”
“I doubt it,” said Orion. “Without Allhin leading the elves we are unsure of their support. And even now with a formal alliance between the Opposition and the fairies, it would still be reckless to continue. No, we must wait for another time. The Enchanter's Council is sending a fleet, but I haven't heard from them for a while. I don't know when--”
“Ambassador Orion!” came another voice down the hallway. This time, a bird entered, a large bird with gold-red plumage and carrying a large pouch. Tucked beneath his wing were two letters.
“Yaroslav,” said Orion. “How did you find me here?”
“Lady Gladya said you were up here,” said the firebird. “I come with tidings from the Enchanter's Council fleet. They have just adjourned their assembly in Juneau. They will be here in another three or four weeks.”
“Are you sure?” Orion asked.
“I was asked to give these to you,” said Yaroslav. He handed the two letters in his wing to Orion.
“Thank you,” said Orion.
The firebird bobbed his head and left.
“Shall I leave you to read, then?” asked Lord Kilan as Orion ripped open the envelopes of his letters.
“No, no, stay,” said Orion. “There might be news worth hearing. Ah, here's one from my personal correspondent! My daughter Mintaka,” Orion explained to Kilan.
“She is with the fleet?” asked Kilan.
“Yes, she is with the fleet. She's the one I asked to bring the Crown Stone here.”
“Indeed.” 

In another scene from that same chapter, we have a glimpse into the captivity of the princesses Alexia and Caroline in Ravun Castle, along with a few important interactions with the major villains.

“Dinner is served, milords,” said the goblin lady bearing the wine. She placed the flagon on the table, bowed, and left. Caroline placed her trays in front of Armalut and Televokov while Alexia gave her single tray to Pintath, who watched both her and the meat greedily. Pintath, being short, leaned his face onto the pig leg and dug in with his bare teeth, while Armault lifted the leg to his mouth and dug in with equal ferocity, making ravenous sounds as he ate. Televokov, however, had a napkin on his lap, and he carved the meat off of his leg with a knife and fork. Caroline opened the wine flagon and poured the contents into the goblets. Armalut downed all of his wine with one gulp and demanded more. Caroline poured for him again, and he drank it all again.
“More!” he shouted.
Caroline hesistated: the flagon in her hands was almost empty.
“Now, Armalut, really,” said Televokov. “You've drunk nearly all of the wine, now. Pintath and I are still on our first glass. Certainly you could save some for us?”
“I want more wine!” roared Armalut. “Send the wench down to the cellars for more.”
“Stop yelling at the table, Armalut,” said Pintath coldly.
“Princess Caroline, pour the rest of the wine for our friend Armalut,” said Televokov, smiling at her.”
Caroline glared at the fairy, but poured the wine into Armalut's goblet as he bid her.
“If it's all gone, I suggest you inform the kitchens that more wine is needed,” said Televokov.
Caroline bowed slightly but did not break eye contact. “Yes, my lord.” She returned to the kitchens.
Televokov watched her leave, and then shifted his gaze to Alexia. Alexia looked at the floor.
“Princess Alexia, why do you not look at me?”
“I don't want to,” she said.
“Look at me,” said Televokov. “I promise, I won't curse you the way I did when I forced you to watch your father's execution. It is easier to look of your own free will.”
“I will not,” said Alexia.
“Princess?”
Alexia glanced up at him, but made sure he saw the hate and fear in her eyes.
“That's better,” said Televokov, sighing.

This is why I am so excited to be so close to finishing this book, because the ending is where everything ties together! I wonder if this is how Brittany Stevens feels, finally being so close to Revunia?

When Eylon asked Brittany how her sword practice had gone in his absence, she reported with embarrassment that she had neglected it. However, Eylon only gave her a light reprimand and returned to his room to unpack.
“What's he in such a good mood for?” Brittany asked Minta.
“Oh, he's just glad that he ran into the other elf leaders and Peace Force commanders at the conference,” Minta said, shrugging. “He's good friends with a lot of them. They'll be arriving in Revunia a couple of days after us with the preliminary force.”
“What do you mean, a couple of days after?” asked Brittany.
“Captain Eric was asked to take the Blue Swan to Revunia first to rendezvous with the Oppositon,” said Minta. “He was picked out because the goblins will be less likely to give him trouble than Avery. Eylon and I have been asked to stay with Eric so we can start discussing things with the Opposition leaders.”
“You're kidding!” said Brittany. “When are we leaving?”
“We leave on July 6th.”
“That's in just over a week—Oh, Minta! We're going to Revunia!” She and Minta embraced. Brittany was so eager to be reaching the fabled country at last, but at the same time she knew that going back meant a lot to Minta.